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Dear [Name],
Thank you for your quick reply.
I have one more question.
I knows that those are the costs for using the car from Stuttgart to France.
Can I ask how to caculate the costs for using the car?
Did it caculated how much time used the car or how far distance like a km they uesd or just per 453Euro?
Please give me a feedback.
Thank you for your help.
강사 첨삭
Hello my dear Bella,
Thank you so much for making your composition..:)
Here are the modifcations I made for you..
Take care my dear..
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Dear [Name],Thank you for your quick reply.
>>correctI have one more question.
>>correctI knows that those are the costs for using the car from Stuttgart to France.
>>I know that those are the costs for using the car from Stuttgart to France.Can I ask how to caculate the costs for using the car?
>>correct
Did it caculated how much time used the car or how far distance like a km they uesd or just per 453Euro?>>Did you calculate how much time usedor how far in km used?
Please give me a feedback.>>correct
Thank you for your help.
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