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2012-06-26 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Dear [Name], Thank you for your quick reply. I have one more question. I knows that those are the costs for using the car from Stuttgart to France. Can I ask how to caculate the costs for using the car? Did it caculated how much time used the car or how far distance like a km they uesd or just per 453Euro? Please give me a feedback. Thank you for your help.

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Hello my dear Bella, Thank you so much for making your composition..:) Here are the modifcations I made for you.. Take care my dear.. xoxoTeacher Cam^^ Dear [Name],Thank you for your quick reply. >>correctI have one more question. >>correctI knows that those are the costs for using the car from Stuttgart to France. >>I know that those are the costs for using the car from Stuttgart to France.Can I ask how to caculate the costs for using the car? >>correct Did it caculated how much time used the car or how far distance like a km they uesd or just per 453Euro?>>Did you calculate how much time usedor how far in km used? Please give me a feedback.>>correct Thank you for your help.

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