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2012-06-26 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

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Hi Alice! These days I feel boring at work, but I don't know why. I think I need to any newie. I'm thirty-one years old, but I would like to try many different things. Anyway, I'm sorry to hear your story. How sad you are! Actually, I don't like any pets because I have an allergy to animal hair. When I'm with animals I'm itchy all over and I can't stop sneezing. Also I have allergies to mosquitoes, house dust mites, alcohol, pollen and so on. So I always must be careful of it. Bye, see you soon.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Oh, you really think of doing some new things. I guess you really need some change. ^^ Anyway, thanks for your time today, [이름]. You a great job today. Excellent! I will see you again tomorrow. Enthusiastically, ~Teacher Alice Hi Alice! >> Correct!These days I feel boring at work, but I don\'t know why. >> Correct!I think I need to any newie. >> I think I need to try a new thing.I\'m thirty-one years old, but I would like to try many different things. >> Correct!Anyway, I\'m sorry to hear your story. How sad you are! >> Correct!Actually, I don\'t like any pets because I have an allergy to animal hair. >> Actually, I don\'t like any kind of pets because I have an allergy to animal hair. >> Actually, I don\'t like any kind of pets because I have an allergy to furr.When I\'m with animals I\'m itchy all over and I can\'t stop sneezing. >> When I\'m with animals I feel itchy all over and I can\'t stop sneezing.Also I have allergies to mosquitoes, house dust mites, alcohol, pollen and so on. >> Correct!So I always must be careful of it. >> Correct! >> OR So I must always be careful.Bye, see you soon. >> Correct!

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