Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Alice!
These days I feel boring at work, but I don't know why.
I think I need to any newie.
I'm thirty-one years old, but I would like to try many different things.
Anyway, I'm sorry to hear your story. How sad you are!
Actually, I don't like any pets because I have an allergy to animal hair.
When I'm with animals I'm itchy all over and I can't stop sneezing.
Also I have allergies to mosquitoes, house dust mites, alcohol, pollen and so on.
So I always must be careful of it.
Bye, see you soon.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Oh, you really think of doing some new things. I guess you really need some change. ^^
Anyway, thanks for your time today, [이름].
You a great job today. Excellent!
I will see you again tomorrow.
Enthusiastically,
~Teacher Alice
Hi Alice!
>> Correct!These days I feel boring at work, but I don\'t know why.
>> Correct!I think I need to any newie.
>> I think I need to try a new thing.I\'m thirty-one years old, but I would like to try many different things.
>> Correct!Anyway, I\'m sorry to hear your story. How sad you are!
>> Correct!Actually, I don\'t like any pets because I have an allergy to animal hair.
>> Actually, I don\'t like any kind of pets because I have an allergy to animal hair.
>> Actually, I don\'t like any kind of pets because I have an allergy to furr.When I\'m with animals I\'m itchy all over and I can\'t stop sneezing.
>> When I\'m with animals I feel itchy all over and I can\'t stop sneezing.Also I have allergies to mosquitoes, house dust mites, alcohol, pollen and so on.
>> Correct!So I always must be careful of it.
>> Correct!
>> OR So I must always be careful.Bye, see you soon.
>> Correct!
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