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Dear [Name], Good afternoon! I heard that the invoice for project P11832 BMW Q35 UP Fragrance will be cancelled and a credit note will be issued, Can I ask when you issue the credit note for cancellation? June or July? Would you please give me the credit note directly if you issue it. Thank you for your help.

Hi again! Well here are my suggestions. Most of my corrections are on the present tense. Kindly look through it. Thanks xoxoT. Cam Dear [Name], >>Correct!Good afternoon! >>Correct!I heard that the invoice for project P11832 BMW Q35 UP Fragrance will be cancelled and a credit note will be issued, >>I heard that the invoice for project P11832 BMW Q35 UP Fragrance will be cancelled and a credit note will be issued. (punctuation}Can I ask when you issue the credit note for cancellation? >>Can I ask when you\'ll issue the credit note for the cancellation?June or July? >>Will it be on June or July?Would you please give me the credit note directly if you issue it. >>Would you please give me the credit note directly if you will be issuing it.Thank you for your help. >>Correct!