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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name]. [Name],
Good morning! As you know we're so busy all the IC-time, Thank you for asking me.
Please see the attached file.
Mr. [Name] who releated colleague already left Behrkorea.
Please contact to Mr. [Name] who new releated colleague and his boss Mr. [Name].
In the future when I send the debit note, I will mention again who are releated Colleagues.
Mrs.Li xiaofan sent invoice of 205.28Euro last month that we didn't received when we closed on Oct 2011.
Mrs.Li xiaofan requested the payment invoice of 205.28Euro but there is no data in the Bellin.
Would you please check and the invoice of 205.28Euro and give me a feedback?
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hello there!
Thank you very much for trusting me your composition. I do hope it helps. Please go over and if you have any questions and/or clarifications, feel free to approach me. See you in class! Take care!
xoxo-T. Cam-
Dear [Name]. [Name],
>> Correct.
Good morning!
>> Correct.
As you know we\'re so busy all the IC-time,
>> As you know, we\'re all very busy at IC-time.
Thank you for asking me.
>> Correct.
or
>>Thank you for asking me, though.
Please see the attached file.
>> Correct.
Mr. [Name] who releated colleague already left Behrkorea.
>> Mr. [Name] is a related colleague who already left Behrkorea.
Please contact to Mr. [Name] who new releated colleague and his boss Mr. [Name].
>> Please contact Mr. [Name] who is a new related colleague and, his boss, Mr. [Name], too.
In the future when I send the debit note, I will mention again who are releated Colleagues.
>> In the future, when I send the debit note, I will mention again who the related colleagues are.
Mrs.Li xiaofan sent invoice of 205.28Euro last month that we didn\'t received when we closed on Oct 2011.
>> Mrs. [Name] sent an invoice of 205.28 euro last month, but we didn\'t receive when we closed last October 2011.
Mrs.Li xiaofan requested the payment invoice of 205.28Euro but there is no data in the Bellin.
>> Mrs. [Name] requested the payment invoice of 205.28 euro but there is no data in the Bellin.
Would you please check and the invoice of 205.28Euro and give me a feedback?
>> Can you check the invoice of 205.28 euro and give me a feedback?
Thank you!
>> Correct.
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