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2012-07-03 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Dear [Name]. [Name], I have some questions about invoice of compensation for radiator package. Mr. [Name] of Purchasing received the invoice of 10,071.59USD from Mr. [Name] xiaofan. There is no data in the check list for June that Mrs.Li already sent me. Would you please check the invoice of 10,071.59USD? Thank you for your help.

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Hello my dear Bella, Thank you for sending in your composition today.. By the way here are the modifications I made for you.. Talk to you later my dear and take care always.. xoxoTeacher Cam^^ Dear [Name]. [Name],I have some questions about invoice of compensation for radiator package. >>correctMr. Kim of Purchasing received the invoice of 10,071.59USD from Mr. [Name] xiaofan. >>correctThere is no data in the check list for June that Mrs.Li already sent me. >>correctWould you please check the invoice of 10,071.59USD? >>correctThank you for your help. >>correct

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