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Dear [Name]. [Name], Good afternoon! I 'd like to check the returned budget with you. J-15002024 of budget alreday returned 192,000,000KRW as seen below. I want to see the person who requested return and when requested return. I want to know more about it. Would you please give me a tip how to know about returned budget? Thank you for your help.

Hello my dear Bella, Thank you for the composition. I think you will be very busy again doing all of your task. I still hope you could relax and unwind..:) Here are the modifications I made for you.. Take care always and have a good day my dear..^^ xoxoTeacher Cam^^ Dear [Name]. [Name],Good afternoon!I \'d like to check the returned budget with you. >>correctJ-15002024 of budget alreday returned 192,000,000KRW as seen below. >>correct...Observe proper spelling of the word OBSERVE..I want to see the person who requested return and when requested return. >>correct I want to know more about it.>>correct Would you please give me a tip how to know about returned budget?>>correct >>Would you please give me a tip on how to know about the returned budget? Thank you for your help. >>correct