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Hello First of all, I'm sorry for late mention for drinking tomorrow . I didn't send invitation anyone. As you know I was so busy for month end closing so we will have time for drinking just two of us. How about drinking with my friends tomorrow if you want it? They are 4 woman. I told them about you yesterday, they want to have drinking with you. Or how about drinking together next Tuesday 10 of July with Ms.Lee and Mr. [Name]. I already invited them yesterday. They accepted it. Maybe 1or 2 person will join us more or not. Which do you want drinking tomorrow two of us or with my friends or 10 of July with Ms.Lee and Mr. [Name]? You can choose two way. Please let me know. Thank you!

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>>Hello! (Don\'t forget  your punctuation mark)
First of all, I\'m sorry for late mention for drinking tomorrow .

>>First of all, I\'m so sorry for the delay of informing you about my plan to drink tomorrow.
I didn\'t send invitation anyone.

>> I didn\'t send an invitation to anyone.

As you know I was so busy for month end closing so we will have time for drinking just two of us.

>>As you know, I was so busy for the month end report so we\'ll have time to drink together.
How about drinking with my friends tomorrow if you want it?

>>If you want, we can have a drink with my friends tomorrow.

>>Would you like us to drink with my friends tomorrow?

They are 4 woman. I told them about you yesterday, they want to have drinking with you.

>>I told my 4 female friends about you yesterday, and they would like to meet you.
Or how about drinking together next Tuesday 10 of July with Ms.Lee and Mr. [Name].

>>Would you like to have a drink with Ms. [Name] and Mr. [Name] next Tuesday,July 10?

>>Would you like us to drink with Ms. [Name] and Mr. [Name] on Tuesday, July 10th?

I already invited them yesterday. They accepted it.

>>Correct  OR;

>>I invited them and they would like to come.

>>I already invited them and they confirmed to come.
Maybe 1or 2 person will join us more or not.

>>Maybe some of my friends will come too.

>>I think 1 or 2 more friends of mine will come too.
Which do you want drinking tomorrow two of us or with my friends or 10 of July with Ms.Lee and Mr. [Name]?

>>Which do you prefer, the two of us together tomorrow or with Ms. [Name] and Mr. [Name] on July 10th?
You can choose two way.

>>It\'s up to you to choose.

>>You can choose any of the two.
Please let me know.

>>Please, let me know.
Thank you!

>>correct