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2012-07-10 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Dear [Name] afternoon! I have some questions about P-11223-50. Our Project management said that SPS L47/L43 Fragance and sales activity. he said that No support from BFR,therefore we don`t pay. If sales activity has been done on other program from BFR on the Fragence should be booked under the right Project Number. Please check the other Project Number and let me know right Project Number If P-11223-50 is not correct, please send me a credit note. Thank you!.

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Hi! Thanks for sending a composition. I checked your sentences here. Please review them. Enjoy your day! ~Teacher Cam~ Dear >>Dear __________, (Insert the name)Good afternoon!>> CORRECTI have some questions about P-11223-50. >> CORRECTOur Project management said that SPS L47/L43 Fragence and sales activity. he said that No support from BFR,therefore we don`t pay. >>Our Project Management said that SPS L47/L43 Fragens and sales activity has no support from BFR, therefore we won\'t pay.If sales activity has been done on other programs from BFR on the Fragence, it should be booked under the right Project Number. >> CORRECTPlease check the other Project Number and let me know the right Project Number>> CORRECT If P-11223-50 is not correct, please send me a credit note.>> CORRECTThank you!. >> CORRECT OR >> Thank you!

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