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2012-07-12 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Dear [Name]. [Name], Good afternoon! I have some questions about the scrapping from Behr Czech. I received the invoice about the scrapping from Behr Czech. You can find the invoice and the results of the trials with new brazing frame and cores from the man CB. Would you please check the amount reasonable or not for payment. Thank you for your help.

강사 첨삭

Hello my dear Bella, Thank you for making your composition today. Here are the modifications I made for you.. Take care always and have a good day my dear.. xoxoTeacher Cam^^ Dear [Name]. [Name],Good afternoon!I have some questions about the scrapping from Behr Czech. >>correctI received the invoice about the scrapping from Behr Czech. >>correctYou can find the invoice and the results of the trials with new brazing frame and cores from the man CB. >>correctWould you please check the amount reasonable or not for payment. >>correctThank you for your help. >>correct  

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