composition
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear sir,
Good afternoon!
Please refer to the final FC2 file as attached and share it with your members.
It will be released in our system a few days later.
If you have question please feel free to contact me.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hello my dear Bella, I think you are busy doing working again but still good job on making your composition today!!
Keep up the good work my dear and talk to you later..
Take care always my dear..
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Dear sir,Good afternoon!>>correctPlease refer to the final FC2 file as attached and share it with your members.>>correctIt will be released in our system a few days later.>>correctIf you have question please feel free to contact me.>>correctThank you!
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