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Dear Sir, Good morning! I would like to receive your approval about rental fee of new plant for July. Tax invoice already issued and it already transfer to National Tax Service even if we didn't accepted. If tax invoice should be canceled, Mr.Kang will request canceled tax invoice. If tax invoice should be accepted, Mr. [Name] will prepare the voucher for month end closing for July. Woudl you please give us reply if you available as soon as possilble? If we don't have any reply the tax invoice still issued in the National Tax Service for July. We don't have any choice. Thank you!

Hi, Good job on your homework! Thank you for doing it. I hope you will learn a thing or two about grammar through the corrections I have made on your composition and if you should have any questions, you can ask me during our class time. Take care! -----xoxoT. Camille-----   Dear Sir, >>>CORRECT!Good morning! >>>CORRECT!I would like to receive your approval about rental fee of new plant for July. >>>I would like to receive your approval about the rental fee of the new plant for July. Tax invoice already issued and it already transfer to National Tax Service even if we didn\'t accepted. >>>The tax invoice was already issued and it was transfered to the National Tax Services even if we have not accepted it yet.If tax invoice should be canceled, Mr.Kang will request canceled tax invoice. >>>If the tax invoice needs to be cancelled,Mr. [Name] will request for it to be cancelled. >>>If the tax invoice needs to be cancelled,Mr. [Name] will do the request for cancellation. If tax invoice should be accepted, Mr. [Name] will prepare the voucher for month end closing for July. >>>CORRECT OR >>> But if the tax invoice should be accepted, Mr. [Name] will prepare the voucher for the end of July. Woudl you please give us reply if you available as soon as possilble? >>>Would you please give us a reply at your soonest available time?If we don\'t have any reply the tax invoice still issued in the National Tax Service for July. >>>If we don\'t receive any reply the tax invoice will still be issued by the National Tax Services for July.We don\'t have any choice. >>>CORRECT!Thank you! >>>CORRECT!