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2012-08-16 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Dear [Name], Good morning! Here are the documents you requested. But we have to receive 23.40Euro invoice of 200679661 as bank transfer. Because the netting is not allowed according to Korea Bank Supervisor. Thank you !

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Hi there! Thank you for the composition you made today! You did a great job! Keep up the good work! Anyway, here are the best suggestions I could give you based on the sentences you sent me today. Have a pleasant day ahead and see you in class! xoxoT. Cam Dear [Name], >>Correct!Good morning! >>Correct!Here are the documents you requested. >>Correct!But we have to receive 23.40Euro invoice of 200679661 as bank transfer. >>But we have to receive 23.49 Euro with an invoice of 200679661 via bank transfer.Because the netting is not allowed according to Korea Bank Supervisor. >>Because netting is not allowed according to the Supervisor of Korea Bank.Thank you ! >>Correct!

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