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2012-08-30 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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Dear [Name], Good morning! Would you please create the bedget ?4050-12-5023 X-P-12020-68-206 Actually the X-P-12020-68-206 budget already created using WBS number of 4050-12-5017. But the 4050-12-5017 was duplicate with X-P-11033-68-204. So we deleted the budget of X-P-12020-68-206 in controller side and I would like to request new budget for X-P-12020-68-206 using 4050-12-5023 . If you have any question please let me know. Thank you.

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Here are the suggestions I\'ve written for some of your sentences for today. :) T. Cam Dear [Name], >>Correct!Good morning!>>Correct!Would you please create the bedget ?4050-12-5023 X-P-12020-68-206 >>Would you please creat the budget for 4050-12-5023 X-P-12020-68-206.Actually the X-P-12020-68-206 budget already created using WBS number of 4050-12-5017. >>Actually the X-P-12020-68-206 budget has already been created using WBS number of 4050-12-5017.But the 4050-12-5017 was duplicate with X-P-11033-68-204. >>But the 4050-12-5017 was duplicated with X-P-11033-68-204.So we deleted the budget of X-P-12020-68-206 in controller side and I would like to request new budget for X-P- 12020-68-206 using 4050-12-5023 .>>So we deleted the budget for X-P-12020-68-206 in the controller side and I would like to request a new budget for X-P-12020-68-206 using 4050-12-5023 .If you have any question please let me know. >>If you have any questions please let me know.Thank you. >>Correct!

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