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Dear [Name],
Good morning!
Would you please create the bedget ?4050-12-5023 X-P-12020-68-206
Actually the X-P-12020-68-206 budget already created using WBS number of 4050-12-5017.
But the 4050-12-5017 was duplicate with X-P-11033-68-204.
So we deleted the budget of X-P-12020-68-206 in controller side and I would like to request new budget for X-P-12020-68-206 using 4050-12-5023 .
If you have any question please let me know.
Thank you.
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Dear [Name],
>>Correct!Good morning!>>Correct!Would you please create the bedget ?4050-12-5023 X-P-12020-68-206
>>Would you please creat the budget for 4050-12-5023 X-P-12020-68-206.Actually the X-P-12020-68-206 budget already created using WBS number of 4050-12-5017.
>>Actually the X-P-12020-68-206 budget has already been created using WBS number of 4050-12-5017.But the 4050-12-5017 was duplicate with X-P-11033-68-204.
>>But the 4050-12-5017 was duplicated with X-P-11033-68-204.So we deleted the budget of X-P-12020-68-206 in controller side and I would like to request new budget for X-P-
12020-68-206 using 4050-12-5023 .>>So we deleted the budget for X-P-12020-68-206 in the controller side and I would like to request a new budget for X-P-12020-68-206 using 4050-12-5023 .If you have any question please let me know.
>>If you have any questions please let me know.Thank you.
>>Correct!
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