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If several route would be added, they are safisfied. ) So I'd like to ask consideration about changing the route of Shuttle Bus for our benefits My rental contract will be terminate next month so I have to decide the mind where I move an other house. If the route of shuttle bus is added many employee be happy as long as belongs BKO. It is important for us. I kindly beg you will manage it all right. Thank you!

Hello my dear bella, Thank you once again for sending in your composition today. Here are the modifications I made for you.. Take care always and have a good day.. xoxoteacher Cam^^ If several route would be added, they are safisfied. ) >>If several route will be added, they will be satisfied.So I\'d like to ask consideration about changing the route of Shuttle Bus for our benefits >>So I\'d like to ask some considerations in changing the route of Shuttle bus for our benefits.My rental contract will be terminate next month so I have to decide the mind where I move an other house. >>My rental contact will be terminated next month so i have to decide whether to move to another house or not.If the route of shuttle bus is added many employee be happy as long as belongs BKO. >>If the route of shuttle is added many employees will be happy as long as they belong to BKO.It is important for us.>>correctI kindly beg you will manage it all right.>>correctThank you! >>correct