composition
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
Good afternoon!
I have some questions about overhead costs of Mr. [Name] and Misc.freight costs.
The misc. freight cost is for whom and what kind of freight cost exectly?
And do you know which is department Mr.Petrenz ?
I have to know the cost center for correct information to put in the SAP.
And please tell us what different cost of the Clearing account - travel costs with AIRPLUS INTERNATIONAL exectly?
I 'd like to know more about it for smooth booking.
Im looking forward for your reply.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hello my dear Bella,
Thank you so much for taking some time to make your composition.
Here are the modifications I made for you..
Talk to you again tomorrow my dear and have a good day..
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Dear [Name],>>correctGood afternoon!>>correctI have some questions about overhead costs of Mr. [Name] and Misc.freight costs.>>correctThe misc. freight cost is for whom and what kind of freight cost exectly?>>correctAnd do you know which is department Mr.Petrenz ?>>And do you happen to know which department Mr.Petrenz is?I have to know the cost center for correct information to put in the SAP.>>correctAnd please tell us what different cost of the Clearing account - travel costs with AIRPLUS INTERNATIONAL exectly?>>correctI \'d like to know more about it for smooth booking. >>correctIm looking forward for your reply.>>correctThank you!
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.