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Dear [Name].Ziehr,
Good morning!
I have a question about F3 of unplanded
Mr. [Name] asked me to change the budget to 750,400,000KRW
4050-12-5005 of budget is 460,556,300KRW now.
Is it possible to increase the budget in Forecast 3 or not ?
If it is possible to increase the budget, we have to reduce the another budget as same amount?
Please see the attached file.
Mr. [Name] already choose the supplier and negotiated the price.
I'm looking forward for your reply.
Thank you.
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Dear [Name].Ziehr,>>CORRECTGood morning!>>CORRECTI have a question about F3 of unplanded >>I have a question about F3.
Note: I am not actually sure of what you mean about \"unplanded\". I\'ve checked on the dictionary to make sure but there is no \"unplanded\" word.
However, I think what you meant was, the fund or budget of F3? If it is so, you can say:
>>I have a question about the funding of F3.
>>I have a concern regarding the funding/budget of F3.Mr. [Name] asked me to change the budget to 750,400,000KRW>>CORRECT4050-12-5005 of budget is 460,556,300KRW now.>>The current budget is 460,556,300KRW.
>>The indicated budget is 460,556,300KRW.Is it possible to increase the budget in Forecast 3 or not ?>>Is it possible to increase the budget of Forecast 3 or not?If it is possible to increase the budget, we have to reduce the another budget as same amount?>>If so, will we have to reduce the other budgets of the same amount?
>>If so, will we have to reduce the other budgets to compensate with the lost amount/increased amount?
Please see the attached file.>>CORRECTMr. Son already choose the supplier and negotiated the price.>>Mr. [Name] has already chose the supplier and negotiated the price.I\'m looking forward for your reply.>>CORRECTThank you.
>>CORRECT
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