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2012-09-14 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Dear all, Good morning! I'd like to inform you that we have plan for payment of Intercompany and overseas on 21.09.2012. Would you please do GR until 17.09.2012 to not delay the payment for intercompany and overseas? Because we have to enter disputes in the reporting system if we can't pay the reason do not GR and something. We have to confirm the invoices that we have to pay or not until 17.09.2012. And please let me know the invoices if you have plan for GR from 18.09.2012 to 21.09.2012. Thank you for your cooperation.

강사 첨삭

Hi there!!!! HAPPY FRIDAY!! Time flies and another week is almost over again. I hope you\'d be able to have  a blast this weekend... Anyway, here\'s your composition and I hope that you\'ll be able to meet your deadline so as not to have problems later.. ^_______^ Comment: There were some minimal errors in the composition but I believe it\'ll be better as you practice more... YOU CAN DO IT!!! Have a nice weekend... xoxoTeacher Cam Dear all,>>> CORRECT!! >>>suggestion: To whom it may concern: Good morning! >>> CORRECT!!!I\'d like to inform you that we have plan for payment of Intercompany and overseas on 21.09.2012. >>> I\'d like to inform you that we plan to pay our Intercompany and overseas on September 21, 2012.Would you please do GR until 17.09.2012 to not delay the payment for intercompany and overseas? >>>In relation to this, would you please submit your GR not later than September 17,2012 so as not to delay the payment for our Intercompany and overseas.Because we have to enter disputes in the reporting system if we can\'t pay the reason do not GR and something. >>> Because we might have disputes in the repoting system if we can\'t pay on time due to late submission of GR and others.We have to confirm the invoices that we have to pay or not until 17.09.2012. >>> We have to confirm the invoices that we have to pay on or before September 17, 2012. And please let me know the invoices if you have plan for GR from 18.09.2012 to 21.09.2012.>>> CORRECT!!  >>>{ Just please change the dates written in numbers into words for uniformity purposes.}Thank you for your cooperation. >>>CORRECT!!          

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