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2012-09-18 · 첨삭 강사 Leny

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Dear [Name], Good morning! I don't know who is proper responsable, if you are not porper responsilbe would you please forward for prorper responsilbe? As project manager mentioned BKO does not have any wps for P-12365 and Ms.Cha of CO couldn't created the IO. it is not valid in BKO. Would you please check again whether P-12365 is correct project for BKO or not. If it is not correct project, would you please give me a credit note of 246.00Euro for payment? For once, I will do Dispute in TM5 today. I'm looking forward for your reply. Thank you!

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Hi there, Thank you for uploading a composition. It\'s all about business, right?^_^ Anyway, please check my corrections. I\'ll see you in class! -T. Cam Dear Ms. Karolina Nowak, >>>CORRECT!Good morning!>>>CORRECT!I don\'t know who is proper responsable, if you are not porper responsilbe would you please forward for prorper responsilbe? >>>I don\'t know who is the proper responsible. If you are not the proper responsible, will you please forward it to me?As project manager mentioned BKO does not have any wps for P-12365 and Ms.Cha of CO couldn\'t created the IO. it is not valid in BKO.>>>As our project manager mentioned BKO does not have any wps for P-12365 and Ms.Cha of CO couldn\'t creat the IO so it is not valid in BKO. Would you please check again whether P-12365 is correct project for BKO or not.>>>Would you please check again whether P - 12365 is the correct project for BKO or not? If it is not correct project, would you please give me a credit note of 246.00Euro for payment?>>>If it is not a correct project, would you please give me a credit note of 246.00 Euro for payment? For once, I will do Dispute in TM5 today. >>>CORRECT!I\'m looking forward for your reply. >>>CORRECT!Thank you! >>>Thank you. 

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