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2012-09-20 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Dear [Name], Good morning! I got it!! :) but so far I didn't uploaded it as a receivable from SBTS and other intercompany like a quality issues. OK! I will upload it manuallly from the September end closing. Thank you for everything!

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Hello there! Time flies...it\'s almost weekend again.. :) Anyway, you did great in this letter.. You\'re getting better in writing letters in English because everyday your errors are decreasing and that\'s great!!!! ^______^ Continue with it!!! Keep practicing... See you later.   xoxoT.Cam-   Dear [Name],>>> CORRECT!!!Good morning! >>>CORRECT!!!I got it!! :) but so far I didn\'t uploaded it as a receivable from SBTS and other intercompany like a quality issues. >>> I got it! :) but so far I haven\'t uploaded it as a receivable from SBTS and other intercompany with quality issues.OK! I will upload it manuallly from the September end closing.>>> Ok! I will upload it manually at the end of Sepetember.Thank you for everything! >>>CORRECT!!! >>>Suggestion: You could close the letter by saying; Sincerely yours, or Respectfully yours, then below you can write your name.

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