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Dear [Name]. [Name],
Good morning!
I think we already paid the invoice of 2012-80950 as attached.
Is it same invoice with 2012-0000555 / 71014 . Am I right?
The invoice of 2012-000055 / 71014 already paid on 20.September.2012.
If it is not same invoice with 2012-0000555 / 71014 ,Please let me know.
Thank you!
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Thank you for your composition.
Please check the corrections and suggestions for your letter.
I\'ll see you in class!
xoxoT. Camille
Here are my corrections:
Dear [Name]. [Name],>>>CORRECT!Good morning!
>>>CORRECT!I think we already paid the invoice of 2012-80950 as attached.
>>>As far as I know, we already paid the invoice 2012-80950, as attached.Is it same invoice with 2012-0000555 / 71014 . Am I right?
>>>Is it the same with the invoice 2012-0000555 / 71014?The invoice of 2012-000055 / 71014 already paid on 20.September.2012.>>>The invoice 2012-000055 / 71014 is already paid on the 20th of September 2012.
If it is not same invoice with 2012-0000555 / 71014 ,Please let me know.>>>If the invoices 2012-000055 / 71014 and 2012-0000555 / 71014 are not the same, please let me know.Thank you!
>>>CORRECT!
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