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Dear all, Good afternoon! As you know we don't have enough time for together. So I'd like to recomended team building for our coworkership. So please let me know if you can't available date because of bussness trip or meeting. If you don't have the prepor time for team building. I'd like to recomended the special gift coupon and dinner. We don't want it will be disappear we didn't used it. Thank you!

Hello!^^ A happy Monday to you. I hope that you had a great weekend. Now, regarding your composition, I can say that you are good at courtesy calls. You do have a clear vision in your mind. We just have to work on how you put your thoughts into words. Please go over my recommendations below. Thank you. [이름] _T.Camille^^ Dear all,>> Correct OR >> To whom it may concern:Good afternoon!>> CorrectAs you know we don\'t have enough time for together. >> As you know, we do not have enough time for each other. >> As you know, we rarely spend time together.So I\'d like to recomended team building for our coworkership. >> So, I would like to recommend a team building activity for our company. >> So, I would like to recommend a team building activity to establish our camaraderie.So please let me know if you can\'t available date because of bussness trip or meeting. >> Please let me know if you are not available because of a business trip or some other meetings.If you don\'t have the prepor time for team building. I\'d like to recomended the special gift coupon and dinner. >> If you do not have the preferred time for team building, I would like to recommend a special gift coupon and a dinner. >> If you can\'t think of a good time for our team building, I would like to recommend a dinner with a special gift coupon.We don\'t want it will be disappear we didn\'t used it.>> We do not want it to be wasted, so let us use it.Thank you! >> Correct