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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name]. [Name],
Good afternoon!
I have a questions about the Migo GR.
We received the goods from HYDRO last month.
Mr. [Name] tried to do Migo GR but the error message says "No item category exists ( table T184L HID NORM V).
It is important to do the end of month.
I already asked Mr. jintae Kim to check the PO number.
Would you please give me a solution in your side for us?
Many thanks for your help.!
강사 첨삭
Hello my dear Bells, good afternoon and happy Friday!!
Thank you so much for making your composition..
Here are the modifications I made for you..
I hope you will enjoy your holiday my dear Bella and I\'m hoping to talk to you again soon..:*
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Dear [Name]. [Name],Good afternoon!>>correctI have a questions about the Migo GR.
>>I have a question about Migo GR.We received the goods from HYDRO last month.
>>correctMr. Park tried to do Migo GR but the error message says \"No item category exists ( table T184L HID NORM V).>>correct
It is important to do the end of month.
>>It is important in the end month closing.I already asked Mr. jintae Kim to check the PO number.>>correct..Observe proper capitalization of the name Jintae.
Would you please give me a solution in your side for us?>>correct
>>Would you please give me a solution for this?
Many thanks for your help.!
>>correct
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