composition 2
학생이 쓴 원문
For the reason, at this essay, I will suggest to reevaluate the photographer Atget through the most authoritative studies about Atget and his photographs. These studies, investigating of Atget’s photo-works, were completed, each, by Maria Morris and Molly Nesbit. Therefore, I expect the negative insistence, which is a barrier to estimate the true value of Atget, is going to be reconsidered through the observation on those two studies.
강사 첨삭
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For the reason, at this essay, I will suggest to reevaluate the photographer Atget through the most authoritative studies about Atget and his photographs.
>>For this reason, as stated in this essay, I suggest that they re-evaluate Atget as a prominent photographer with the help of attested studies, investigation even, about him as a person and his outstanding work of art.
These studies, investigating of Atget’s photo-works, were completed, each, by Maria Morris and Molly Nesbit.
>>These studies were compeleted by Maria Morries and Molly Nesbit.
Therefore, I expect the negative insistence, which is a barrier to estimate the true value of Atget, is going to be reconsidered through the observation on those two studies.
>>Correct!
>>I expect tha t these negative persistence, whish is a barrier to estimate the real value of Atget, be removed totally with their help through their existing studies.
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