composition 2

2013-11-12 · 첨삭 강사 Hannah

학생이 쓴 원문

For the reason, at this essay, I will suggest to reevaluate the photographer Atget through the most authoritative studies about Atget and his photographs. These studies, investigating of Atget’s photo-works, were completed, each, by Maria Morris and Molly Nesbit. Therefore, I expect the negative insistence, which is a barrier to estimate the true value of Atget, is going to be reconsidered through the observation on those two studies.

강사 첨삭

Hi there!^^ Here\'s the continuation of the first one.kk See you my dera Won Woo! I hope it would actually help.kk ~t. Hannah~ For the reason, at this essay, I will suggest to reevaluate the photographer Atget through the most authoritative studies about Atget and his photographs. >>For this reason, as stated in this essay, I suggest that they re-evaluate Atget as a prominent photographer with the help of attested studies, investigation even, about him as a person and his outstanding work  of art.  These studies, investigating of Atget’s photo-works, were completed, each, by Maria Morris and Molly Nesbit. >>These studies were compeleted by Maria Morries and Molly Nesbit. Therefore, I expect the negative insistence, which is a barrier to estimate the true value of Atget, is going to be reconsidered through the observation on those two studies. >>Correct! >>I expect tha t these negative persistence, whish is a barrier to estimate the real value of Atget, be removed totally with their help through their existing studies.

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