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1. The weather man reports it will approximately reach 35 degree of Celsius today. 2. The height of Mt. Baekdusan is approximately 2,744 meters. 1. The implementation of the plan is delaying due to the strong protest from the opposite parties. 2. I am worrying about our country’s future due to young generation’s imprudent behavior. 1. The long draught affects agricultural produce. 2. Smoking affects not only the smokers’ health but also the nonsmokers’ beside him/her. I think that my yesterday's composition should be corrected only by adding "The" to "last evening", not "happened", so that "happened to watch" is correct.

Happy Friday Ms. [Name]!!! You're sentences are actually good. It expresses your idea. But sometimes, some conjunctions and interjections were missing or misused and that is the only area that I am correcting. Though they are only composed of 2 or 3 letters they are still important to make your sentences grammatically correct. Always, stay happy and healthy!!! Have a great weekend!!! Lei :-)  1. The weather man reports that it will be approximately reach 35 degree of Celsius today. >>The weather man reports that it will be approximately 35 degree Celsius today.2. The height of Mt. Baekdusan is approximately 2,744 meters.>>correct1. The implementation of the plan is delaying due to the strong protest from the opposite parties.>>The implementation of the plan was delayed due to the strong protest from the opposite parties. 2. I am worrying about our country’s future due to young generation’s imprudent behavior. >>correct1. The long draught affects agricultural produce.>>The long draught affects the country's agricultural productivity. 2. Smoking affects not only the smoker's health but also the nonsmokers beside him/her. >>correct >>Smoking affects not only the smoker's health but also the nonsmokers around hin/her. (better/generally speaking) I think that my yesterday's composition should be corrected only by adding "The" to "last evening", not "happened", so that "happened to watch" is correct