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Dear [Name]. [Name], Good morning! I received your proposal as seen below. Please refer to the below e-mail. As our project manager mentioned BKO does not have any wps for P-12365 and Ms.Cha of Controller couldn't create the IO. So it is not valid in BKO. We've used the cost element 45000420 and cost ctr 620068. After month-end, it might be canceled and re-booked with internal order. But we couldn't create the internal order. Because BKO does not have any wps for P-12365. It is problem for payment this invoice. But I didn't received answer your side. Thank you for your help.

Hello there! Your composition is good. Just be careful with the proper positions of words in your sentences. In addition, take note of the correct verb tenses that would fit your sentences.  Have a nice day!

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Dear [Name]. [Name],
>>Correct.
Good morning!

>>Correct.
I received your proposal as seen below.

>>I have received your proposal.
Please refer to the below e-mail.

>>Please refer to the e-mail below.
As our project manager mentioned BKO does not have any wps for P-12365 and Ms.Cha of Controller couldn\'t create the IO.

>>As what our project manager has mentioned, BKO does not have any wps for P-12365 and Ms. [Name] of Controller couldn\'t create the IO.

So it is not valid in BKO.

>>Correct.
We\'ve used the cost element 45000420 and cost ctr 620068.

>>Correct.
After month-end, it might be canceled and re-booked with internal order.

>>By the end of the month, it might be canceled and re-booked with internal order.
But we couldn\'t create the internal order.

>>Correct.
Because BKO does not have any wps for P-12365.
>>Correct.

OR>>But we couldn\'t create the internal order because BKO does not have any wps for P-12365.
It is problem for payment this invoice.

>>This is the problem with the payment of this invoice.
But I didn\'t received answer your side.
>>But I didn\'t receive any answer from your side.
Thank you for your help.

>>Correct.