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2012-10-16 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

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Dear [Name]. [Name], Good afternoon! We have a big problem the debit note of 200726456. This debit note was issued as 97,200pcs although SBTS requested scrapping of 9,720pcs last July. I checked the this issue with QC and LOG team. Mr. [Name] of QC team said that it is one of human error and 9,720pcs is right. But it already returned 97,200pcs in out system. so I cannot cancel the debit note. Actually this 97,200pcs is not pysical delivery to SBTS. They've requested pysical return first after that they changed the mind to scrapping after we already return in our system. because of cost. In a word, 9,720pcs is right and debit note amount should be 1,470.63Euro. How to resolve this problem? Can I request the debit note of 14,706.36Euro ( 87,480pcs) to SBTS ? I'm looking forward for your reply. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hello there! Thank you for your composition. Kindly check my corrections please. Have a great day! see you in class

-T. Camille-

Dear [Name]. [Name],
>> Correct.
Good afternoon!
>> Correct.
We have a big problem the debit note of 200726456.
>> We have a big problem regarding the debit note 200726456.

This debit note was issued as 97,200pcs although SBTS requested scrapping of 9,720pcs last July.

>> In the debit note, they issued 97,200 pcs although SBTS requested the scrapping of 9,720 pcs last July.
I checked the this issue with QC and LOG team.

>> I checked this issue with the QC and the LOG team.
Mr. [Name] of QC team said that it is one of human error and 9,720pcs is right.
>>Mr. [Name] of QC team said that it is a human error and 9,720pcs is right.

But it already returned 97,200pcs in out system. so I cannot cancel the debit note.
>> But they already returned 97,200 pcs in out system, so I cannot cancel the debit note. 

Actually this 97,200pcs is not pysical delivery to SBTS.

>> Actually the 97,200pcs was not personally delivered at SBTS.
They\'ve requested pysical return first after that they changed the mind to scrapping after we already return in our system. because of cost.

>> They requested to scrap the goods but we already returned them because of the cost.
In a word, 9,720pcs is right and debit note amount should be 1,470.63Euro.

>> In other words, 9,720pcs is right and debit note amount should be 1,470.63Euro.
How to resolve this problem?

>> How can we resolve this problem? 
Can I request the debit note of 14,706.36Euro ( 87,480pcs) to SBTS ?

>> Correct.
I\'m looking forward for your reply.

>> Correct.
Thank you!

>> Correct.

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