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2012-10-18 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Dear [Name], Good morning! I sent uncomplited e-mail. Sorry for that. Please never mind first e-mail from me. I have some questions about R&D costs. We has some review time about R&D costs with our Project manager. Here is review result of R&D costs from BFR as attached. Our PM said that Behr Korea usually issueds sample(proto) as free of charge and P-10729 and P-11033 are why it might not chargeble to BKO accodingly. Would you please check invoice of 15382810 again?(P-10729 / P-11033) I will dispute this invoice this month in Bellin. And I'd like to request more detail about P-10729 of 15382809 and 15387093. Our PM said that it is calculated working hours are much higher than normal. And I'd like to check terms of the payment about R&D costs and Protos. The terms of payment is "before 30 in 3months Due net" in the invoice and TM5. Is it correct one? I'm looking forward for your reply. Thank you!

강사 첨삭


Hello, again!

This sure is likely a delicate matter.

Nevertheless, I am so glad that you trust my proofreading skills.^^

Take care!

_T.Camille^^

Dear [Name],
>> Correct
Good morning!

>> Correct
I sent uncomplited e-mail.

>> I sent an incomplete e-mail.

Sorry for that.

>> I am so sorry about that.

Please never mind first e-mail from me.

>> Please do not mind the first e-mail from me.
I have some questions about R&D costs.

>> I have some questions regarding the R&D costs.
We has some review time about R&D costs with our Project manager.

>> We have some time to review the R&D costs with our Project manager.
Here is review result of R&D costs from BFR as attached.

>> Here is the result of the review of R&D costs from BFR.

>> I attached the result of the review of R&D costs from BFR.
Our PM said that Behr Korea usually issueds sample(proto) as free of charge and P-10729 and P-11033 are why it might not chargeble to BKO accodingly.
>> Our PM said that Behr Korea usually issues sample(proto) as free of charge and P-10729 and P-11033 might not be chargeable to BKO accordingly.

Would you please check invoice of 15382810 again?(P-10729 / P-11033)

>> Would you please check the invoice of 15382810 again?(P-10729/P-11033)
I will dispute this invoice this month in Bellin.

>> I will make a dispute on this invoice this month in Bellin.
And I\'d like to request more detail about P-10729 of 15382809 and 15387093.

>> And I\'d like to request for more details about P-10729 of 15382809 and 15387093.
Our PM said that it is calculated working hours are much higher than normal.

>> Our PM said that it is the calculated working hours and that it is much higher than the normal one.

>> Our PM said that it is the calculated working hours and that it is much higher than the regular one.
And I\'d like to check terms of the payment about R&D costs and Protos.

>> And I\'d like to check the terms of payment regarding R&D costs and Protos.
The terms of payment is \"before 30 in 3months Due net\" in the invoice and TM5.

>> Correct
Is it correct one?

>> Is it the correct one?
I\'m looking forward for your reply.

>> Correct
Thank you!

>> Correct

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