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Hello, again!
This sure is likely a delicate matter.
Nevertheless, I am so glad that you trust my proofreading skills.^^
Take care!
_T.Camille^^
Dear [Name],
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Good morning!
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I sent uncomplited e-mail.
>> I sent an incomplete e-mail.
Sorry for that.
>> I am so sorry about that.
Please never mind first e-mail from me.
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Please do not mind the first e-mail from me.
I have some questions
about R&D costs.
>> I
have some questions regarding the R&D costs.
We has some review
time about R&D costs with our Project manager.
>> We
have some time to review the R&D costs with our Project
manager.
Here is review result of R&D costs from BFR as
attached.
>> Here is the result of the review of R&D costs from BFR.
>> I
attached the result of the review of R&D costs from BFR.
Our PM
said that Behr Korea usually issueds sample(proto) as free of charge and P-10729
and P-11033 are why it might not chargeble to BKO accodingly.
>> Our PM said that Behr Korea usually issues sample(proto)
as free of charge and P-10729 and P-11033 might not be chargeable to BKO
accordingly.
Would you please check invoice of 15382810 again?(P-10729 / P-11033)
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Would you please check the invoice of 15382810 again?(P-10729/P-11033)
I will dispute this invoice this
month in Bellin.
>> I will make a dispute on this invoice this month in Bellin.
And I\'d like to request more detail about
P-10729 of 15382809 and 15387093.
>> And I\'d like to request for more details about P-10729 of 15382809 and 15387093.
Our PM said that it is calculated working hours
are much higher than normal.
>> Our PM said that it is the calculated working hours and that it is much higher than the normal one.
>> Our PM said that it is the calculated working hours and that it is much higher than the regular one.
And I\'d like to check terms of the payment
about R&D costs and Protos.
>> And I\'d like to check the terms of payment regarding R&D costs and Protos.
The terms of payment is \"before 30 in 3months
Due net\" in the invoice and TM5.
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Is it correct one?
>> Is it the correct one?
I\'m looking forward for your
reply.
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Thank you!
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