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2012-10-18 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Dear [Name]. [Name], Good morning! The invoice of 18468451 is holding the payment so long time. So I'd like to clear this invoice for payment. Our PM said that to pay 40 hours to BHambach it`s not possible should be BES. So would you please check again? Unfortunately, I will dispute this invoice again. I'm looking for your reply. Thank you.

강사 첨삭

Good morning!

Here it is.

I am so sorry for the long wait.

I hope that everything will likely go well.

Enjoy your day!

_T.Camille^^

Dear [Name]. [Name],
>> Correct

Good morning!
>> Correct
The invoice of 18468451 is holding the payment so long time.

>> The invoice of 18468451 is holding the payment for a very long time now.
So I\'d like to clear this invoice for payment.

>> So, I\'d like to clear this invoice for the payment.
Our PM said that to pay 40 hours to BHambach it`s not possible should be BES.

>> Our PM said that to pay 40 hours to BHambach is not possible. It should be BES.
So would you please check again?

>> Would you please check it one more time?
Unfortunately, I will dispute this invoice again.

>> Unfortunately, I will revoke this invoice again.

>> Unfortunately, we may encounter a dispute regarding this invoice again.
I\'m looking for your reply.
>> I\'m anticipating for your urgent reply.
Thank you.

>> Correct

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