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I hope that I am of help to you even for a bit.
I do wish you all the best in all your endeavors today.
_T.Camille^^
Dear [Name],
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Good morning!
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How are you?
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We have a problem with RNV balance.
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We have issued the debit note of 97,200pcs and return delivery
97,200pcs in our system lask July.
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have issued the debit note of the 97,200pcs and return delivery of the 97,200pcs
in our system last July.
But we found wrong quantity 97,200pcs.
9,720pcs is right.
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But we found out that the quantity of the 97,200pcs is incorrect. 9,720 is the
correct count.
Our QC team made a wrong quantity 97,200pcs and they
was scrap 9,720pcs.
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Our QC team made a wrong count of 97,200pcs and there were scraps
of 9,720pcs.
It is human error.
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is a human error.
So I reverse the debit note of 97,200pcs and rebook
the debit note of 9,720pcs for SBTS yesterday.
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I reversed the debit note of 97,200pcs and re-booked the debit note of 9,720pcs
for SBTS yesterday.
Please see the below e-mail.
>> Please see the e-mail below.
After that I can find the RNV balance of
14,706.36Euro (97,200pcs) and 1,470.63Euro (9,720pcs) in SAP (marked
red).
>> After that, I can find the RNV balance of 14,706.36Euro (97,200pcs) and 1,479.63Euro (9,729pcs) in SAP (marked red).
Would you please give me an advice on how to
remove this balance.
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If you need more informaion, please let me
know.
>> If you need more information regarding this, please let me know.
I\'m looking forward for your
reply.
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Thank you for your help.
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