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Some people choose friends who are different from themselves. Others choose friends who are similar to themselves. Compare the advantages of having friends who are different from you with the advantages of having friends who are similar to you. Which kind of friend do you prefer for yourself? Why?
There are some advantages of having friends who are similar to you. First, you can easily talk about your interests. You can enjoy your hobbies and have meals together. Second, you can share your complaints. You can relieve stress after you speak ill of those together.
On the other hand, there are some merits of having friends who are different from you. You can make up for your fault each other. And you can enjoy new world you've never experienced.
I prefer a friend who are similar to me because if we have similar hobbies and experiences, we can talk and think more time together. So there is a old saying, 'Birds of a feather flock together.'
강사 첨삭
You are absolutely right. We normally hang out with people who are more like us. ^^ Thanks for your sharing your opinion on this topic [이름]. Hope you had a marvelous weekend. Looking forward to talking with you tomorrow. Take care! ^^
T. Aurora
Some people choose friends who are different from themselves. Others choose friends who are similar to themselves. Compare the advantages of having friends who are different from you with the advantages of having friends who are similar to you. Which kind of friend do you prefer for yourself? Why?There are some advantages of having friends who are similar to you.
>>Correct!
First, you can easily talk about your interests.
>>Correct!
You can enjoy your hobbies and have meals together.
>>Correct!
Second, you can share your complaints.
>>Correct!
You can relieve stress after you speak ill of those together.
>>You can relieve stress after you speak ill of others together.On the other hand, there are some merits of having friends who are different from you.
>>Correct!
You can make up for your fault each other.
>>You can make up for you fault to each other.
And you can enjoy new world you\'ve never experienced.
>>And you can enjoy new worlds you\'ve never experienced.I prefer a friend who are similar to me because if we have similar hobbies and experiences, we can talk and think more time together.
>>I prefer a friend who is similar to me because if we have similar hobbies and experiences, we can talk and think moreof our time together.
So there is a old saying, \'Birds of a feather flock together.\'
>>So there is an old saying, \"Birds of the same feather, flock together.\"
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