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2012-10-24 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

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Dear [Name]. [Name], Good morning! I'm sorry for the delay e-mail for you. Would you please see the e-mail below? These invoices are holding the payment because we have quality issue not solved yet. SMS and BKO of Quality (Mr. Y.B Lee) are taking further investigation on it. Thank you!

강사 첨삭


Hello there.^^
I hope that you are doing fine.
Enjoy your day!
_T.Camille^^
Dear [Name]. [Name],
>> Correct
Good morning
!
>> Correct
 I\'m sorry for the delay e-mail for you.

>> I\'m sorry for my delayed e-mail to you.
Would you please see the e-mail below?

>> Correct
OR >> Would you please check the e-mail below?
These invoices are holding the payment because we have quality issue not solved yet.

>> These invoices are holding the payment because we have an unresolved quality issue.
SMS and BKO of Quality (Mr. Y.B Lee) are taking further investigation on it.

>> SMS and BKO of Quality (Mr. Y.B Less) are investigating on it a little further.
Thank you!
>> Correct

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