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2012-11-01 · 첨삭 강사 Ritchel

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Dear [Name], Good morning! Would you kindly issue the overhead costs about Mr. [Name] of1,198.40Euro on November if you can do that? And then the overhead costs will be 33.00Euro in October. I think we can't receive the answer from Mrs.Veronika before the month end closing. Please tyr to understand us. I'm looking forward for your reply. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Good morning!

It\'s the first day of the month!

I hope that you are doing well.

Take care.

T.Camille^^

Dear [Name],

>>  Correct 

OR >> Dear [Name],

Good morning!

>>  Correct

Would you kindly issue the overhead costs about Mr. [Name] of1,198.40Euro on November if you can do that?

>>  Would you kindly issue the overhead costs of Mr.Haubner  for about 1,198.40Euro on November , if possible?

And then the overhead costs will be 33.00Euro in October.

>> And then the overhead costs will be 33.00Euro on October. 

I think we can\'t receive the answer from Mrs.Veronika before the month end closing.
>> I think we can wait for the answer of Mrs.Veronika before the closing of the month.

Please tyr to understand us.

>> Please try to understand us.

I\'m looking forward for your reply.

>> Correct

Thank you!

>> Correct

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