Composition
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Write a composition about one of the most challenging day in your life.
I remember vividly the most challenging day in my life. When I was a freshman, I went to Toronto alone. I visited many historic buildings around the eastern part of Canada. One day, I took in a bus, Greyhound, and headed for Niagara Falls. It was amazing and there were lots of people. I hadn't reserved a room for sleep in advance, I had to find a vacancy around the falls for several hours. Despite my effort, I failed to find any hotel or motel which had any vacancies, because it was weekend. So I sat and leaned on a bench all night hearing the loud and awful sound of waterfalls. Next morning, I went back to Toronto with the first bus. I sometimes think the night, if I have some troubles to be overcome. It was not only the hardest day in my life, but also it became my booster from now on.
강사 첨삭
What an incredible experience you had there. The great thing is that you turned that awful experience into a lesson and motivation.^^
T. Aurora
Write a composition about one of the most challenging day in your life.I remember vividly the most challenging day in my life.
>>Correct!
When I was a freshman, I went to Toronto alone.
>>Correct!
I visited many historic buildings around the eastern part of Canada.
>>Correct!
One day, I took in a bus, Greyhound, and headed for Niagara Falls.
>>One day, I rode a bus named Greyhound and headed for Niagara Falls.
It was amazing and there were lots of people.
>>Correct!
I hadn\'t reserved a room for sleep in advance, I had to find a vacancy around the falls for several hours.
>>I wasn\'t able to reserve a room in advance. I had to find a hotel around the falls for several hours.
Despite my effort, I failed to find any hotel or motel which had any vacancies, because it was weekend.
>>Correct!
So I sat and leaned on a bench all night hearing the loud and awful sound of waterfalls.
>>So I sat and leaned on a bench all night hearing the loud and awful sound of the waterfalls.
Next morning, I went back to Toronto with the first bus.
>>Next morning, I went back to Toronto on the first bus.
I sometimes think the night, if I have some troubles to be overcome.
>>I sometimes think about that night when I have some troubles to overcome.
It was not only the hardest day in my life, but also it became my booster from now on.
>>Correct!
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