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Some people believe that students should be given one long vacation each year. Others believe that students should have several short vacations throughout the year. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice. There may be pros and cons about which one is better, one long vacation or several short vacations. I've had many vacations in the last 15 years and I've experienced advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, vacations for students should be given in the light of the weather condition. There are definite 4 seasons in Korea. It's very hot in summer, but it's very cold in winter. So almost all students need to take summer and winter vacations. Of course, if I want a long journey, it's not possible in this system. But I think it'll be suitable in my country. According to my view, there may be a long summer vacation in tropical region and a long winter vacation in cold area.

I have to commend you on constructing your sentences well. You have shared on your opinions well but there is still more to improve in terms of the logical order of your sentences and giving more detailed answers. Nonetheless good job. Take care always. T. Aurora Some people believe that students should be given one long vacation each year. Others believe that students should have several short vacations throughout the year. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.There may be pros and cons about which one is better, one long vacation or several short vacations. >>Correct! I\'ve had many vacations in the last 15 years and I\'ve experienced advantages and disadvantages. >>Correct! In my opinion, vacations for students should be given in the light of the weather condition. >>Correct!  There are definite 4 seasons in Korea. >>Correct!  It\'s very hot in summer, but it\'s very cold in winter. >>Correct! So almost all students need to take summer and winter vacations. >>Correct! Of course, if I want a long journey, it\'s not possible in this system. >>Of course, if I want a long journey then it\'s not possible in this system.  But I think it\'ll be suitable in my country. >>Correct! According to my view, there may be a long summer vacation in tropical region and a long winter vacation in cold area. >>According to my view, there should be a long summer vacation in tropical regions and a long winter vacation in cold area.