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2012-11-14 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

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Dear [Name]. [Name], Good morning! BFR said that these prototypes have cost us parts, and personnel costs and not free of charge. Would you please contact and check with BFR and tell us the result if you don't mind? Thank you for your help! Dear [Name]. [Name], Good morning! Thank you for your reply. I'm looking forward for Mr.Kerroum's reply. He will give us information that we should pay or not after contact BFR. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

A pleasant morning to you!
Enjoy your day!
T.Camille^^

Dear [Name]. [Name],
Good morning!
>>Correct
BFR said that these prototypes have cost us parts, and personnel costs and not free of charge.
>> BFR said that these prototypes have cost us parts and personnel costs, since these are not free of charge.
Would you please contact and check with BFR and tell us the result if you don\'t mind?
>> Would you please contact BFR, clarify this matter and tell us the result, if you don\'t mind.
Thank you for your help!
>>Correct
Dear [Name]. [Name],
Good morning!
>>Correct
Thank you for your reply.
>>Correct
I\'m looking forward for Mr.Kerroum\'s reply.
>>I\'ll be waiting for Mr. [Name]\'s reply.
He will give us information that we should pay or not after contact BFR.
>>He will inform us if we should pay after getting in touch with BFR or not.
Thank you!
>>Correct

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