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2012-12-05 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Dear [Name], Good morning! First of all, thank you for your quick support. As Mr. [Name] mentioned the attached taraveling costs are based on his old jod in Stuttgart. It seems these costs are not belongs Behr Korea. So would you please check again and please let me know. If these costs are not belongs Behr Korea, please send us the credit note for cancelling. I have some question about traveling cost for Mr.Ullrich. Is this traveling cost for Mr.Ullrich reasonable? If this traveling cost for Mr.Ullrich is reasonable, would you please give me a information related cost center in BKO? I'm looking forward for your reply.

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Good morning!This is it!May you have a great day!xoxoT.Camille^^Dear [Name],Good morning!>>CORRECT!First of all, thank you for your quick support.>>First of all, thank you for your support. Your response was so quick.As Mr. [Name] mentioned the attached taraveling costs are based on his old jod in Stuttgart.>> Like what Mr.Kohler mentioned, the attached traveling costs are based on his old job in Stuttgart.It seems these costs are not belongs Behr Korea.>> It seems that these costs do not belong to Behr Korea.So would you please check again and please let me know.>> So would you please check it again and let me know the result as soon as possible.If these costs are not belongs Behr Korea, please send us the credit note for cancelling.>> If these costs do not belong to Behr Korea, please send us the credit note for the cancellation of it.I have some question about traveling cost for Mr.Ullrich.>>I have some questions about the travelling cost for Mr.Ullrich.Is this traveling cost for Mr.Ullrich reasonable?>>Is the travelling cost for Mr.Ullrich reasonable?If this traveling cost for Mr.Ullrich is reasonable, would you please give me a information related cost center in BKO?>>If this traveling cost for MR.Ullrich is reasonable, would you please give me information about the related cost center in BKO?I\'m looking forward for your reply.>>CORRECT!

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