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2012-12-05 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Dear [Name], Good afternoon! Please see the e-mail below. I have already done the confirmation of the invoice about the traveling costs for Mr. [Name] last month. But we didn't have enough informations so we couldn't pay this invoice last month. I know that I have to confirm the invoice if we can pay it. But we don't have any choice. I requested the credit note if this invoice are not belong to BKO. So this invoice should be remainded the balance on November. Please try to understand us and please upload this invoice in IC balance. I'm looking forward for your reply. I'm sorry for that.

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Hello my dear Bella, Thank you so much for making this composition.. Here are the modifications I made for you.. Talk to you again tomorrow and take care..:) xoxoTeacher Cam^^ Dear [Name],Good afternoon! >>correctPlease see the e-mail below. >>correctI have already done the confirmation of the invoice about the traveling costs for Mr. [Name] last month. >>correctBut we didn\'t have enough informations so we couldn\'t pay this invoice last month. >>But we didn\'t have enough information so we couldn\'t pay the invoice last month.I know that I have to confirm the invoice if we can pay it. >>correctBut we don\'t have any choice. >>correctI requested the credit note if this invoice are not belong to BKO. >>I requested a credit note if this invoice doesn\'t belong to BKO.So this invoice should be remainded the balance on November. >>So there is a remainder balance on November in our invoice.Please try to understand us and please upload this invoice in IC balance.>>correctI\'m looking forward for your reply. >>correctI\'m sorry for that. >>correct

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