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2012-12-06 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Dear [Name]. [Name], Good morning! I received the this invoice today early in the morning. We don't have enough information regarding this invoice. Mr.Juhon Sung of our Quality team has requested the support regarding Cooling Module. Am I right? Would you please give us more information regarding this invoice? ( When you start support and when you finish support?) We will check this invoice with our Quality team. If this invoice should be charged other company please send a credit note. For November, we will remain the balance of this invoice in AP. Thank you!

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Hello my dear Bella!I hope that you are having a great time.Take care always and keep yourself warm!xoxoT.Camille^^Dear [Name]. [Name],Good morning! >>Correct!I received the this invoice today early in the morning. >>I just received the invoice early this morning.We don\'t have enough information regarding this invoice. >>Correct!OR >> We don\'t have enough information about this invoice.Mr.Juhon Sung of our Quality team has requested the support regarding Cooling Module. Am I right? >>Mr. [Name], from our Quality team, has requested for the support for the Cooling Module. Am I right?Would you please give us more information regarding this invoice? >> Correct!( When you start support and when you finish support?) >> (When will the support start and when will it end?)We will check this invoice with our Quality team. >> Correct!If this invoice should be charged other company please send a credit note. >>If this invoice should be charged to other companies, please send me a credit note.For November, we will remain the balance of this invoice in AP. >>As of November, we will maintain the balance of this invoice in AP.Thank you!>>Correct!

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