Composition
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to be a member of a group than to be the leader of a group. Support your answer.
I think it depends on the individual and the situation. Some people like to be a member, some want to be a leader. Someone can be a member and a leader at the same time. For example, I was chief resident at my university hospital, and I was also a member of surgery department. It's the same in the Army.
However, if I can choose one of them, I'd rather be a leader of a group. The leader may feel pressure if there are some problems, but he can have the honor when his group achieves a great work. I like this old saying, 'Better be the head of a snake than the tail of a dragon'.
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I like that saying you shared at the end of your homework. Being a leader sure is very challenging. Making decisions for other person is never an easy task. However, the opportunity to make a difference and influence people in a good way is always priceless. :) I\'m sure you are a very motivating leader and you\'ll get even better in it as time goes by. I hope you\'ve had an exceptional weekend [이름]! See you tomorrow!
T. Aurora
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to be a member of a group than to be the leader of a group. Support your answer.I think it depends on the individual and the situation.
>>Correct!
Some people like to be a member, some want to be a leader.
>>Correct!
Someone can be a member and a leader at the same time.
>>Correct!
For example, I was chief resident at my university hospital, and I was also a member of surgery department.
>>For example, I was a chief resident at my university hospital, and I was also a member of the surgery department.
It\'s the same in the Army.>>Correct!
However, if I can choose one of them, I\'d rather be a leader of a group.
>>Correct!
The leader may feel pressure if there are some problems, but he can have the honor when his group achieves a great work.
>>Correct
I like this old saying, \'Better be the head of a snake than the tail of a dragon\'.
>>Correct!
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