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2012-12-14 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Dear [Name]. ooo I try to contact proper responsible regarding traveling cost for you but it spend too much time. So would you please give me an answer whether we should pay or not to save the time? If you give me an answer that it should be not paid, I will contact other responsible Mr. [Name]. But if you give me an answer that it should be paid, I will prepare the payment on 20.Dec.2012. I'm looking forward for your reply. Thank you for your help.

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Good morning!I hope that you are having a great day.Smile!T.Camille^^Dear [Name]. ooo>>Dear [Name].__ ,I try to contact proper responsible regarding traveling cost for you but it spend too much time.>> I will try to contact those people who are responsible for handling your traveling cost for you, but it will take a considerable amount of time.>> I tried to contact those people who are responsible for handling your traveling cost for you, but it is taking us too much time.So would you please give me an answer whether we should pay or not to save the time?>> So would you please give me an answer for us to know whether we should pay for it or not to save time?If you give me an answer that it should be not paid, I will contact other responsible Mr. [Name].>> If you will tell us that it should not be paid, I will contact another responsible person for it who is Mr.Oswald.But if you give me an answer that it should be paid, I will prepare the payment on 20.Dec.2012.>> But if you will tell us otherwise, [that it should be paid], I will prepare the payment on the 20th of December 2012.I\'m looking forward for your reply.>>Correct!Thank you for your help.>>Correct!

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