Composition

I'm sorry I didn't answer your call on Friday. I was waiting my class, but my smartphone didn't ring. I think the most important function of a phone is to make good connection but smartphones have some unnecessary funtions. And I'll have to change my phone because it has lasted nearly for 3 years. What will you do this year to make it better than the previous year? I'll be discharged from the military service and go back to my university hospital next year. So I think this year is important for me and my life because I'll be busy working at the hospital. First, I'll learn golfing. Many friends of mine are playing golf and they say that's really interesting. Second, I'll keep studying English, so I want to enjoy movies and novels in English.Finally but the most important thing for me this year is I'll become a father.I'm longing for meeting my baby and I'll try to stay with him if I have free time this year. I'll probably put off to learn golfing if I need time with my baby.

Don\'t worry about last Friday.  I guess it\'s a good idea to buy a new smarphone. You must be very excited to be a father. I heard that it\'s one of the most fulfilling jobs ever. I hope you\'d find time to watch English shows, work, play golf and spend time with your baby. It\'s going to be very busy week for you, I\'m sure. Good luck! I\'ll see you tomorrow. T. Aurora   I\'m sorry I didn\'t answer your call on Friday. >>I\'m sorry I didn\'t answer your call last Friday. I was waiting my class, but my smartphone didn\'t ring. >>I was waiting for my class, but my smartphone didn\'t ring. I think the most important function of a phone is to make good connection but smartphones have some unnecessary funtions. >>Correct! And I\'ll have to change my phone because it has lasted nearly for 3 years.>>Correct! >>And I\'ll have to change my phone because it\'s been with me for 3 years. What will you do this year to make it better than the previous year?>>Correct! I\'ll be discharged from the military service and go back to my university hospital next year. >>Correct! So I think this year is important for me and my life because I\'ll be busy working at the hospital. >>Correct!  First, I\'ll learn golfing. >>Correct!  Many friends of mine are playing golf and they say that\'s really interesting. >>Many friends of mine are playing golf and they say that it is really interesting.  Second, I\'ll keep studying English, so I want to enjoy movies and novels in English. >>Correct! Finally but the most important thing for me this year is I\'ll become a father. >>Correct! I\'m longing for meeting my baby and I\'ll try to stay with him if I have free time this year. >>I\'m longing to meet my baby and I\'ll try to spend time with him during my free time this year.  I\'ll probably put off to learn golfing if I need time with my baby. >>I\'ll probably put off learning how to golf if I need time to be with my baby.