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Do you agree that one MUST learn English to be competitive in the society
I don't think everyone has to learn English. English has already become more commonplace. But still many jobs in the society don't related English at all. Though some people like to learn English for the fun of it or for the sake of feeling accomplishment, language have to be used continuously. So if we are in a situation exposed to English, then we must learn English very hard to be competitive in the society.
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Thanks once again [이름] for your opinion. English is indeed very important and if you want to be globally competitive then I guess improving in English will benefit you a lot. Have a great weekend.
T. Aurora
Do you agree that one MUST learn English to be competitive in the societyI don\'t think everyone has to learn English.
>>Correct!
English has already become more commonplace.
>>English has already become very common.
But still many jobs in the society don\'t related English at all.
>>But still, many jobs in the society don\'t require English at all.
>>But still, there are jobs not related to English as well.
Though some people like to learn English for the fun of it or for the sake of feeling accomplishment, language have to be used continuously.
>>Though some people like to learn English for the fun of it or for the sake of feeling accomplished. The language however, has to be used continuously.
So if we are in a situation exposed to English, then we must learn English very hard to be competitive in the society.
>>Correct!
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