Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
Which one is more beautiful for you, the sunset or sunrise? Explain why.
Though both the sunset and sunrise are very beautiful, I prefer to see the sunrise. When I sometimes see it getting back from work, I feel happy that I can meet my family soon, enjoy good dinner with them and get into my comfortable bed. So I think the sunrise is more beautiful to me than the sunset because it always makes me pleasant.
강사 첨삭
Enjoy the sunrise tomorrow as we are about to start another week.
Let\'s try to start it with a renewed energy and embrace it fully. Talk to you tomorrow.
T. Aurora
Which one is more beautiful for you, the sunset or sunrise? Explain why.Though both the sunset and sunrise are very beautiful, I prefer to see the sunrise.
>>Correct!
When I sometimes see it getting back from work, I feel happy that I can meet my family soon, enjoy good dinner with them and get into my comfortable bed.
>>Correct!
So I think the sunrise is more beautiful to me than the sunset because it always makes me pleasant.
>>So I think the sunrise is more beautiful to me than the sunset because it always makes me feel pleasant.
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