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Hi, Louise! I postponed the plan to next weekend. It will take so long time. On the Lunar New Year`s Day, we greet the elder people. We call it New Year`s Bow. We kneel down, bend over at the wrist, and bow our head. The elder people tell us words of blessing. We give kids diffrent amount of money acoording as their age. I gave a lot of greetings to elder people. We usually put on layers of undergarments in winter because it is too cold. This kinds of clothes are called as `'long underwear' or 'thermal underwear'. Happy Lunar New Year and Enjoy the succeeding holidays. Kindest Regards, [이름]

Hi there! Thank you for sending me your composition. I had fun reading it. I am sorry to hear that you postponed your plans. I feel great because you expressed your thoughts well and you were able to use different vocabularies. I hope that you will have a wonderful weekend. Happy New Year! See you next week! Teacher Louise Here are my corrections for you: Hi, Louise! >>Hi Louise!I postponed the plan to next weekend. >> I postponed my plans for the next weekend.It will take so long time. >> It will take a long time.On the Lunar New Year`s Day, we greet the elder people. >> During the Lunar New Year\'s Day, we greet the elders.We call it New Year`s Bow. >> Correct!We kneel down, bend over at the wrist, and bow our head. >> We kneel down, bend over our wrist and we bow our head.The elder people tell us words of blessing. >> The elderly people tells us words of blessing.We give kids diffrent amount of money acoording as their age. >> We give the children amount of money according to their age. OR >> The amount of money we give to kids depends on their age.I gave a lot of greetings to elder people. >> I give lots of greeting to elder people.We usually put on layers of undergarments in winter because it is too cold. >> We usually wear layers of undergarments during winter because it is too cold. OR >> We usually wear layers of clothings during winter because the weather is really cold.This kinds of clothes are called as `\'long underwear\' or \'thermal underwear\'. >> These kinds of clothes are called \"long or thermal underwear\". OR >> We call these kinds of clothes \"long or thermal undergarments\".Happy Lunar New Year and Enjoy the succeeding holidays. >>Happy Lunar New Year and enjoy your holiday.Kindest Regards, >>Kindest regards,[이름] >> Correct!