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2013-02-22 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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Try to explain the following quotation: "Our attitudes control our lives." I always try to make my soldiers and patients, but I sometimes get angry or yell at them. Whenever I do those things, I feel sorry to them. However, one of my collegues is always kind and keeps him cool. So everyone includes me likes him and he has many close friends. I think this quotation has the same meaning that I have to treat people kindly first, if I want to be treated as I want.

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How we treat others has a big impact to our lives. It can affect the relationship we have with people as well as how we\'ll do our jobs. Very good explanation [이름]. You interpreted it well. I hope this weekend will bring you joy and rest. Take care. T. Aurora Try to explain the following quotation:\"Our attitudes control our lives.\"I always try to make my soldiers and patients, but I sometimes get angry or yell at them. >>I always try to help my soldiers and patients but I sometimes get angry or yell at them. Whenever I do those things, I feel sorry to them. >>Whenever I do those things, I feel sorry for them. However, one of my collegues is always kind and keeps him cool. >>However, one of my colleagues is always kind and keeps his cool. So everyone includes me likes him and he has many close friends. >>So everyone including me like him and he has many close friends. I think this quotation has the same meaning that I have to treat people kindly first, if I want to be treated as I want. >>Correct!

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