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2013-05-01 · 첨삭 강사 wendy

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In London, a court has applied copyright to classic music that a comtemporary composer arranged. Trio's record label CMI has lost a case, so it is cutting down on business plans for new records to pay legal cost and royalites for the songs that has been considered out of copyright. But many in the music industry are welcoming the trend of copyright expansion and even they are hoping copyright to be brodened more. 1950's Rock&Roll singers are asking European countries to extend receiving time of royalties beyond 50 year which is today's leagal limit set by law. In Europe from 2008 British singer Jim will lose coppyright and therefore royalties to his hits. It doesn't make sense to me that i lose right on my own songs. You copy all of my hits paying nothing to me. In America, music that was issued before 1978 gets protection for 95 years from the time it has issued. If it goes like this, Jim's songs will lose copyright in Europe next year, and Kim will follow with it from 2013.

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Hi [이름]. Thank you for sending me your composition. I noticed that nyou forget the word \"THE\" in your sentences so all you have to to is practice some more. I eveluated all of your compositions and from 1-10 you will get an 8 as a score. You are good in writing sentences but there a few slips. You also forget to check your sentences. That is a MUST in writing compositions. Always check your sentences and also you punctuation marks. You understand better the use of has had and have so that is a thumbs up. Another thing that I notice is you forget to capitalize \"I\" in your sentences. Other than that, you did a very good job. If you have questions, feel free to ask in class. See you! --T. WENDY In London, a court has applied copyright to classic music that a comtemporary composer arranged. >> Correct Trio\'s record label CMI has lost a case, so it is cutting down on business plans for new records to pay legal cost and royalites for the songs that has been considered out of copyright. >> Trio\'s record label CMI has lost a case, so it is cutting down on business plans for new records to pay legal cost and royalites for the songs that have been considered out of copyright. But many in the music industry are welcoming the trend of copyright expansion and even they are hoping copyright to be brodened more. >> But many in the music industry are welcoming the trend of copyright expansion and they even are hoping copyright to be broadened more. 1950\'s Rock&Roll singers are asking European countries to extend receiving time of royalties beyond 50 year which is today\'s leagal limit set by law. >> 1950\'s Rock&Roll singers are asking European countries to extend the receiving time of royalties beyond 50 years which is today\'s legal limit set by the law. In Europe from 2008 British singer Jim will lose coppyright and therefore royalties to his hits.>> In Europe, from 2008\'s British singer Jim, will lose coppyright and therefore royalties to his hits. It doesn\'t make sense to me that i lose right on my own songs. >> It doesn\'t make sense to me that I lose the right on my own songs. You copy all of my hits paying nothing to me. >> You copy all of my hits and pay me nothing. In America, music that was issued before 1978 gets protection for 95 years from the time it has issued. >> In America, music that was issued before 197, gets protection for 95 years from the time it has issued. If it goes like this, Jim\'s songs will lose copyright in Europe next year, and Kim will follow with it from 2013. >> If it goes like this, Jim\'s songs will lose the copyright in Europe next year and Kim will follow it starting in 2013.

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