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Actually, I don't agree with this statement. Of course, childhood tesrs are important to person. I'm not sure that time is the most important. Because I think person can change easily even if the event is trivial. Also, in my opinion, Mind makes person's character or thoughts. People are thinking and thinking after all they change. But, child forget easily and they don't think deeper. So, I think the most important years are youth. Because the youth can think more deeper. In addition, they are so oversusceptible. So What happen to them, they are changable easily, bad or good.

Good evening [이름]! Thank you once again for sharing your thoughts. We each have our own moments in life where we have learned the best lessons in life. It all depends on how we were brought up and how fast we have adapted to the changes happening around us. Here are the corrections I made for you. Be careful with your articles. ~ T. Giselle   Actually, I don\'t agree with this statement.>> Correct!Of course, childhood tesrs are important to person.>> Of course, childhood years are important to a person.I\'m not sure that time is the most important.>> I\'m not sure if this time is the most important.Because I think person can change easily even if the event is trivial.>> Because I think a person can change easily even if the event is trivial.Also, in my opinion, Mind makes person\'s character or thoughts.>> Also, in my opinion, a person\'s character or thoughts are created in his mind.People are thinking and thinking after all they change.>> People think and think and after that they change.But, child forget easily and they don\'t think deeper.>> But for children, they forget things easily and they don\'t think deeply.So, I think the most important years are youth.>> So I think the most important years in life is our youth.Because the youth can think more deeper.>> Because youth think deeper.In addition, they are so oversusceptible.>> Correct.So What happen to them, they are changable easily, bad or good. >> So what happens to them is that they can easily change, either good or bad changes.