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Yes, I agree with this statement. 2-30 years ago, going university meant getting a job. So most people who endrolled university got a job as soon as they graduated. But now, most high school students go to university. So diplomas are not rare anymore. That is why we have to worry about getting a job for 4 years. We have to get high score or one more certifications than other students.

Hello there [이름], Nowadays, going to university is really  important. In this competitive world, we have to always be better than others so that we won\'t be left behind. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Here are the corrections I made for you. See you! ~ T. Giselle   Yes, I agree with this statement.>> Correct2-30 years ago, going university meant getting a job.>> Twenty or thirty years ago, going to university for me meant getting a job.So most people who endrolled university got a job as soon as they graduated.>> So most people who finished university got a job as soon as they graduated.But now, most high school students go to university.>> Correct.So diplomas are not rare anymore.>> Correct.That is why we have to worry about getting a job for 4 years.>> Correct.We have to get high score or one more certifications than other students. >> We have to get higher scores or more certicifications than other students.