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I have many things that make me irritating. But one of them is the places where lots of people are in. I don't like these kinds of places from the childhood. When I was younger than now, even I don't like to go outside. There are some reasons to not go to crowd places. First, these places are always nosiy. So I feel confused. And second one is getting stress. I have to care to crash people who are beside me. So going crowd places make me annoy

Good afternoon [이름]! Thank you for this composition. I appreciate that you you have shared something about you again. Please go over these corrections I made for  you. See you! ~ T. Giselle   I have many things that make me irritating.>> There are many things that annoy me.But one of them is the places where lots of people are in.>> Correct. >> OR: One of them is crowded places.I don\'t like these kinds of places from the childhood.>> I didn\'t like this kind of place since my childhood.When I was younger than now, even I don\'t like to go outside.>> When I was young, I didn\'t even want to go outside.There are some reasons to not go to crowd places.>> There are reasons why I hate crowded places.First, these places are always nosiy. So I feel confused.>> First, these places are always noisy so I feel confused.And second one is getting stress.>> Secondly, I feel stressed when I am in such places.I have to care to crash people who are beside me.>> I have to be careful not to hit people beside me.So going crowd places make me annoy >> So going to crowded places annoys me.