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An-san city isn't big. So it takes around 40minutes to go everywhere Also we have lots of big markets. So we can buy anything we want. In addition, we have many parks and mountains. Whereas we have factory area. So sometimes (not everyday) it is foggy and we can smell strange. But!! I like to live in my hometown.

Happy Tuesday [이름]! Wow! You did your homework really early today. ^_^ Thank you for spending a few minutes of your busy day in doing your homework. You made really good sentences here. Please review the few corrections I made for you. Enjoy the rest of the day!! ~ T. Giselle ~   An-san city isn\'t big.>> Correct.So it takes around 40minutes to go everywhere>> Correct. >> OR: So it it takes 40 minutes to go around the city.Also we have lots of big markets. >> Correct. So we can buy anything we want.>> Correct.In addition, we have many parks and mountains.>> Correct.Whereas we have factory area.>> Whereas, we have a factory area. >> OR: We have factories in our area.So sometimes (not everyday) it is foggy and we can smell strange.>> So sometimes (not everyday) it is foggy and we can smell strange odors.But!! I like to live in my hometown. >> But, I like living in my hometown.